tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8526683900253948041.post8001519089750471326..comments2024-03-27T02:20:51.751-05:00Comments on J.L. Spelbring: Submission HeatherAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07804306924674002487noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8526683900253948041.post-13894045860864465942011-04-21T11:12:22.179-05:002011-04-21T11:12:22.179-05:00Thank you so much Eliza! In my query letter is say...Thank you so much Eliza! In my query letter is says Emily but for the 140 Twitter pitch I had to shorten it. ;)Heatherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05130733681254163610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8526683900253948041.post-78118484455199335312011-04-21T06:49:52.834-05:002011-04-21T06:49:52.834-05:00Your pitch grabbed my attention, but I think it sh...Your pitch grabbed my attention, but I think it should say girl or Emily. It had to reread it twice.<br /><br />Beautiful imagery and I love this idea. I'm a big fan of historical fantasy : ) I'd keep reading!If you ever need a fantasy beta, message me!Eliza Tiltonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00765731038856226730noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8526683900253948041.post-62135500173000736262011-04-19T18:54:08.820-05:002011-04-19T18:54:08.820-05:00Thank you so much for your feedback Tina, Lindsey,...Thank you so much for your feedback Tina, Lindsey, and Enigma!Heatherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05130733681254163610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8526683900253948041.post-7944177942390647032011-04-19T14:15:24.425-05:002011-04-19T14:15:24.425-05:00Very good! I kind of like the opening line. It kin...Very good! I kind of like the opening line. It kind of sets the tone. Good luck.Enigma TheKeyshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13967278906421254972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8526683900253948041.post-28247111070659694302011-04-19T12:43:42.324-05:002011-04-19T12:43:42.324-05:00I actually do not have any critiques for this entr...I actually do not have any critiques for this entry, Heather writes with an poignant elegance that has been perfected over the years. :)Lindsey Edwardshttp://www.thewritewords-lindsey.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8526683900253948041.post-5080779882784504722011-04-19T08:48:26.825-05:002011-04-19T08:48:26.825-05:00Heather! I love your writing. You have a high fant...Heather! I love your writing. You have a high fantasy tone to your work, but still keep that individual character voice. I know little about Emily, but I already like her. <br /><br />My one snafu is the opening line... "Just like they had done time and again..." - this doesn't grab me as much as I want it to. I'm also not usually one for descriptions, but your details paint a vivid picture. <br /><br />Overall, nice work! :DTina Mosshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09892617933410379929noreply@blogger.com