tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8526683900253948041.post7535155424824320009..comments2024-03-27T02:20:51.751-05:00Comments on J.L. Spelbring: Submission JackieAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07804306924674002487noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8526683900253948041.post-15161763777331320522015-12-22T00:56:30.126-06:002015-12-22T00:56:30.126-06:00Banned complain !! Complaining only causes life an...Banned complain !! Complaining only causes life and mind become more severe. Enjoy the rhythm of the problems faced. No matter ga life, not a problem not learn, so enjoy it :)<br /><br /><a href="http://goo.gl/QKOZ85" rel="nofollow">Manfaat Perawatan Susu Bagi Kesehatan Kulit Wajah Anda</a> <br /><a href="http://goo.gl/aGJf12" rel="nofollow">Cara Menghilangkan Kanker Rahim Stadium Awal</a> <br /><a href="http://goo.gl/7bzi4G" rel="nofollow">Cara Mengobati Ambeien Luar</a> <br /><a href="http://goo.gl/a8dDSg" rel="nofollow">Obat Herbal Tumor Kelenjar Parotis</a> <br /><a href="http://goo.gl/QMwjYI" rel="nofollow">Tips Pengobatan Alternatif Diabetes Melitus</a><br /><a href="http://goo.gl/Ubx6Wg" rel="nofollow">Obat Kolesterol Alami Untuk Melawan Kolesterol Jahat</a><br /><a href="http://goo.gl/Se6eJT" rel="nofollow">Solusi Sehat Dengan Herbal Alami </a><br /><a href="http://goo.gl/MPfgti" rel="nofollow">Pengobatan Syaraf Kejepit Di Kaki</a><br /><a href="http://goo.gl/7ddzfh" rel="nofollow">Obat Diabetes Herbal Terbaik</a> <br /><a href="http://goo.gl/wc3QOB" rel="nofollow">Pengobatan Tumor Bibir Atas Dan Bawah</a> <br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04723201723175985290noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8526683900253948041.post-75534362017490246932011-05-02T21:15:27.392-05:002011-05-02T21:15:27.392-05:00This is a very interesting take! The concept is vi...This is a very interesting take! The concept is visually different and draws the reader in!! The dark slighted humor and atmosphere make one want to know what little Miss Hadley will and "can" .....do!<br /><br />Excellent!!!<br /> S.R.<br /><br />p.s. The smaller the Roses thorn-The deeper it goes to the Bone!<br /><br />"Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8526683900253948041.post-28827087653279083692011-04-30T15:50:33.405-05:002011-04-30T15:50:33.405-05:00Cage Fighting!!?!! OMG!!! How Awesome!!!
The voic...Cage Fighting!!?!! OMG!!! How Awesome!!!<br /><br />The voice is freakin' awesome!<br /><br />I agree with Michelle. This needs to be published soon! :)Annie McElfreshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14312634754232333138noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8526683900253948041.post-66374991173754132892011-04-19T13:05:06.367-05:002011-04-19T13:05:06.367-05:00Gifted cage-fighting??? Are you kidding me? I'...Gifted cage-fighting??? Are you kidding me? I'm with Michelle--this HAS to get snatched up! Fantastic premise and voice!Jesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14121018905141253640noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8526683900253948041.post-69972679780071034342011-04-19T10:13:17.352-05:002011-04-19T10:13:17.352-05:00Great voice. There are so many simple details that...Great voice. There are so many simple details that make this so easy to visualize. The mix of humor with the dark subject especially hooked me since I don't usually like dark stuff, but you made this gripping.Kimberlee Turleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04695299361596799423noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8526683900253948041.post-20260450211081475632011-04-19T05:31:24.228-05:002011-04-19T05:31:24.228-05:00These first pages hook me from the word stench. Th...These first pages hook me from the word stench. The YA voice is clear and I want to know what is happening next. The words are well chosen and they set the story up to be a great read!Kimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09745302400759911758noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8526683900253948041.post-15102959830970706072011-04-19T01:11:25.510-05:002011-04-19T01:11:25.510-05:00I seriously think this one should be first. It'...I seriously think this one should be first. It's got great humor, a great premise, and an opening here that really hooks you into the story with awesome characterization. Just from these 250 alone, if you don't get an agent sometime soon dear, I'll be completely shocked. :)<br /><br />Would read. Would read x1000.Michellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07079557797478488058noreply@blogger.com