tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8526683900253948041.post5191837087560958474..comments2024-03-27T02:20:51.751-05:00Comments on J.L. Spelbring: Rachel McClellan --post 3Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07804306924674002487noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8526683900253948041.post-43522430832807047902011-09-24T21:22:14.312-05:002011-09-24T21:22:14.312-05:00I loved your descriptions, and the fact that it...I loved your descriptions, and the fact that it's taking place in a cemetery, since i love exploring cemeteries.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8526683900253948041.post-37084139102411960322011-09-23T17:57:05.814-05:002011-09-23T17:57:05.814-05:00Really nice build up to the kiss I could picture i...Really nice build up to the kiss I could picture it clearly, and I like the setting of it happening in a cemetery.A.J. Lockehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08514343224203400113noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8526683900253948041.post-21483472247895487832011-09-22T11:25:00.109-05:002011-09-22T11:25:00.109-05:00Vivid details. Great job!Vivid details. Great job!Tish Thawerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05975151986945802877noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8526683900253948041.post-68177347672120156442011-09-20T21:40:55.260-05:002011-09-20T21:40:55.260-05:00Great job! I'm anxious to read more!Great job! I'm anxious to read more!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8526683900253948041.post-35691772085742550962011-09-20T21:39:20.991-05:002011-09-20T21:39:20.991-05:00Loved this excerpt...it makes me want to read more...Loved this excerpt...it makes me want to read more and flesh in the story. The characters give the story color and richness. Good job!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8526683900253948041.post-8079794084112814762011-09-20T10:50:24.376-05:002011-09-20T10:50:24.376-05:00If only it were real. Very nicely done!If only it were real. Very nicely done!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8526683900253948041.post-80218731910061494712011-09-19T23:26:28.883-05:002011-09-19T23:26:28.883-05:00Okay, so the title alone makes me want to read thi...Okay, so the title alone makes me want to read this. Especially since I just finished The Eternal Ones and loved it.<br /><br />But I love the first paragraph too. Want to know more about the world he had created and why. The setting is eerily romantic too. <br /><br />I love when a writer does a great job mixing dark with light like this. I tend to think that adds to romance. Great job! Super writing! <br /><br />Loved it Rachel! Great job!Melindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11542106414099032742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8526683900253948041.post-91523944614372725002011-09-19T21:45:36.338-05:002011-09-19T21:45:36.338-05:00Love the way you draw us in with movement and need...Love the way you draw us in with movement and need. Awesome! Great job.E. Arroyohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06634213563563094173noreply@blogger.com