tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8526683900253948041.post4634306003096090595..comments2024-03-27T02:20:51.751-05:00Comments on J.L. Spelbring: Jenny --post 10Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07804306924674002487noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8526683900253948041.post-39110264347985905032011-09-24T20:09:51.701-05:002011-09-24T20:09:51.701-05:00I like how this one builds tension about their rel...I like how this one builds tension about their relationship and what trajectory it might take.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8526683900253948041.post-16087524066355675972011-09-23T18:02:14.883-05:002011-09-23T18:02:14.883-05:00This is a very nice moment and very telling about ...This is a very nice moment and very telling about what could possibly happen between them in the futureA.J. Lockehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08514343224203400113noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8526683900253948041.post-49504164986780136772011-09-22T17:38:54.638-05:002011-09-22T17:38:54.638-05:00I like the build up of this. Can't wait to see...I like the build up of this. Can't wait to see how things with the MC progress.Tish Thawerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05975151986945802877noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8526683900253948041.post-67262916546705482062011-09-19T21:43:37.637-05:002011-09-19T21:43:37.637-05:00Great scene. I love the inner dialogue and the clo...Great scene. I love the inner dialogue and the close POV of your mc. It drew me in to what she was feeling. Great jobE. Arroyohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06634213563563094173noreply@blogger.com