tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8526683900253948041.post2442905474632541580..comments2024-03-27T02:20:51.751-05:00Comments on J.L. Spelbring: Submission MichelleAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07804306924674002487noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8526683900253948041.post-87040358308330438302015-12-22T00:52:45.370-06:002015-12-22T00:52:45.370-06:00I say many thanks to Mr. admin website I read this...<br />I say many thanks to Mr. admin website I read this, because in this website I know a lot of information information that I did not know before his<br /><br /><a href="http://goo.gl/8WWbXs" rel="nofollow">Gejala Utama Kanker Rahim Yang Sering Dirasakan</a> <br /><a href="http://goo.gl/NB0976" rel="nofollow">Makanan Yang Harus Di Konsumsi Ibu Hamil Agar Bayi Cerdas</a> <br /><a href="http://goo.gl/iKQLWq" rel="nofollow">Penyebab Terjadinya Susah Tidur Atau Insomnia</a> <br /><a href="http://goo.gl/vDkkQp" rel="nofollow">Menu Diet Untuk Penderita Asma</a> <br /><a href="http://goo.gl/PXJvYm" rel="nofollow">Hilangkan Bekas Luka Di Wajah Secara Cepat Dengan Madu</a> <br /><a href="http://goo.gl/C9fTLz" rel="nofollow">Hilangkan Jerawat Dengan Kayu Manis</a> <br /><a href="http://goo.gl/8Dt5Fj" rel="nofollow">Gejala Kanker Tenggorokan Stadium Awal</a> <br /><a href="http://goo.gl/6N98Xr" rel="nofollow">Sayuran Mengandung Serat Tinggi Baik Bagi Penderita Wasir</a> <br /><a href="http://goo.gl/Mq0vvJ" rel="nofollow">Ayo Hilangkan Wasir Dengan Konsumsi Sengkuang</a> <br /><a href="http://goo.gl/F9ZGFZ" rel="nofollow">Obat Alami Penghilang Benjolan Di Leher</a> Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04723201723175985290noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8526683900253948041.post-71382428845074652532011-04-30T15:36:16.893-05:002011-04-30T15:36:16.893-05:00GAH!!! So freakin' good! The voice is amazing ...GAH!!! So freakin' good! The voice is amazing in this piece. I love the dark memory of killing someone. That tells me right up front this MC would kick someones ass in a minute and I love those kind of MCs. They make for great reads. <br /><br />I love the pitch. I've been itching for another good alien YA story. <br /><br /><br />I'd def. Read on! Nice work!! :)Annie McElfreshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14312634754232333138noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8526683900253948041.post-38482611155651194512011-04-20T21:40:32.615-05:002011-04-20T21:40:32.615-05:00I love your voice, and especially the descriptions...I love your voice, and especially the descriptions! Your writing is so beautiful. And an alien parasite is so unique! Good luck <333J.S. Woodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09231458559331295121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8526683900253948041.post-77109413834064429002011-04-20T20:24:58.016-05:002011-04-20T20:24:58.016-05:00I love alien stories! I did a happy dance when I s...I love alien stories! I did a happy dance when I saw this was one in your pitch. <br /><br />I got a little lost in the first sentence. Maybe try: 'My mistake was figuring this would be easy.' You would still have the feeling of assumption, but less words. Try it and see how you like it or ignore it. ^^<br /><br />'The blood blossoms like a dark flower in my memory.' Love this line!Darcy Drakehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15263535041680335553noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8526683900253948041.post-3862855559640985892011-04-19T12:46:53.549-05:002011-04-19T12:46:53.549-05:00Great pitch! I'm a sucker for alien stories. I...Great pitch! I'm a sucker for alien stories. I'd buy it on the premise alone. <br />The voice and tone are clear, and make the reader want to invest in this.<br />Awesome work!!!Jackiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04526192448146446752noreply@blogger.com